A Short Demo

[Two hands31]

Just looking for opinions and suggestions on this, it's on my MP3.com page, titled "Demo3"

http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/623/eleven59.html

[matt_cater]

cool riff, very eery sound to it.
would like to hear more from that song, see where it goes

[OME]

I actually heard the beat kick in with some heavy snare accompanied
by some de-tuned guitar and low bass. Also heard some lead guitar double-timing off the rythmn.

I liked it
Sounds Mean and Dirty

[Two hands31]

Thanx for the comments

I've been trying for weeks to get the main body of that one going. But I can't find anything that doesn't take away from that intro. I loved it when I came up with it because I thought it sounded kinda weird and yet melodic-ish.