hey guys check out my little clip

[j.arledge]

i was jammin a bit ealier and i decided to record it . So this little clip is from the session . I havn't really every posted a clip other then for a pickup so i thought i'd post this . There are mess ups and there isn't really any organization just want some feedback on tone or whatever else you like or dont like

http://www.podsafeaudio.com/jamroom/...mode=song_hifi

[j.arledge]

wow no one i must really suck

[ibanezcollector]

ok I will say this first.. YOU KICK MY ASS AS FAR AS PLAYING FAST..

But it seems like you need to back it down a few BPM and work on the fluidity of it.. It seems a bit I dont want to say sloppy but it seems forced..

Slow it down some and dont worry so much about speed as you should accuracy.. I am working on accuracy myself and its much harder to play accurate than it is fast.

Speed is a tool, accuracy is a foundation..

Its good to have tools in your tool box, but with out the tool box you just got a mess on the table.

Again your playing is far more advanced then my own and I give you respect for that alone.. Im just being honest and not trying to sound mean.

[j.arledge]

Originally Posted by ibanezcollector

ok I will say this first.. YOU KICK MY ASS AS FAR AS PLAYING FAST..

But it seems like you need to back it down a few BPM and work on the fluidity of it.. It seems a bit I dont want to say sloppy but it seems forced..

Slow it down some and dont worry so much about speed as you should accuracy.. I am working on accuracy myself and its much harder to play accurate than it is fast.

Speed is a tool, accuracy is a foundation..

Its good to have tools in your tool box, but with out the tool box you just got a mess on the table.

Again your playing is far more advanced then my own and I give you respect for that alone.. Im just being honest and not trying to sound mean.

no man thanks , i am looking for honesty , that i why i posted it .

[mi2tom]

It's cool! I think I'll never get that fast though

[Kabala]

I agree with the "sounding a bit forced" thing, plenty of speedy stuff there no doubt, just needs to breathe more, like once you started adding the rhythm ideas in towards the end, it flowed better. Great stuff though...