Im 16 been playing two years: what you think of my playing??? (CLIP)

[Kipperfetish]

I been playing since my 14th birthday. Just recorded this with the pod xt i aquired for my 16th birthday a month ago. What do you think. Used my ibanez rg2550E. Sorry there is two mistakes, but apart from that it is perfect i think. I used a backing track and wrote all the leads myself. At about 2:30 there is a bit of shred. What you think of my playing? Its inspired by Vai:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=3228321

thanks guys.