please check my playing

[sam669]

Yesterday I recorded an improvisation over a funk backing track and would appreciate it if you guys gave me some feedback

Here's the link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/samanthonymusic.htm

thanks.

[anecdota]

A few notes and a few phrases here and there are out of key. It seems to me that all those staccato notes don't seem to fit the timing of the backing track. Don't be bashful to let a note really ring. Maybe it's just me, but all the staccato notes didn't touch me nicely.

[Anton]

I have to agree with anecdota about those staccato notes , but I think you have great potential and your note choice is really cool in some places , and you have some real nice phrasing and chops in some places , but some need cleaning up a little , but like I said dude , you have great potential and there are some real cool ideas there
peace
anton

[sam669]

thanks for the comments!

I've noticed that staccato thing in my playing, I do that alot when improvising... A habit I'm trying to loose :/

keep the comments coming, about the guitar sound or whatever you feel like criticizing!

[anecdota]

constructive criticism...i'm sure you know

[MALAM]

You definitely made me feel better about my playing

[sam669]

haha man, if you've been playing for less time than me, then yeah you can feel safe!