plz Review my new instrumental Indian groove!

[Ralph khoury]

Here it is http://www.freewebs.com/ralph-khoury...n%20groove.mp3
the backing track consists of sitar and tabla! i got a jazz phusion apporach in my solos, and i am pretty much inspired by Vai! tell me ur opinion!

[darren wilson]

Have you posted this before?

[Ralph khoury]

i've posted it in the recording section but it wasnt reviewed so i guess i put it in the wrong section! anyways did u hear it?

[darren wilson]

I listened to a bit of it, but it was taking too long to download so i didn't bother downloading the whole thing.

To be honest, i didn't care much for the tinny sounding fake sitar and tabla sounds. And i think you're playing too many notes right off the start. Try developing a melodic theme first, then ripping into it later.

But that's just my opinion. And you know what they say about opinions...

[Ralph khoury]

Thx for ur review ! actually there is a basic theme in the begining and the end of the instrumental, as for the middle section its all improvised, and i had a weird approach, something which might be disturbing at 1st, not too many people liked it, and they all criticised the speedy approach, i was actually experimenting with an unorthodox approach in soloing, i got other instrumentals, and they are completely different, i'll upload them as soon as i finish recording. now for the speedy approach u could notice that its chopped into fragments, its not like a non stop run, these are small melodic ideas that includes fast pickings! and i tell u again, this project is weird and exotic and i wana c peoples reaction to it!

[darren wilson]

I didn't really listen to it long enough to hear the whole thing. Partly because the download speed was so slow, and partly because i just didn't care for what i heard.

If you want to get more reviews, i might suggest putting your MP3s up where people can download them more quickly.

[Ralph khoury]

sadly my server is slow, can u tell me where i can put it for free and fast?

[hanban]

sorry m8, im trying to download but its going on half k/sec

let me know when you put it up on a faster server

[jeff l]

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