It sounds like a good start

; however, don't fall into the trap of letting a finger pattern dictate the music. Finger patterns are great for learning the fretboard, but that is where it should stop.
It sounds like your picking is pretty well syncronized, however your note selection and vibrato needs some work. Listen to a little Hendrix or Vai and take a rest from the finger patterns for a little while. Take note of the music they are making

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