Suggestions?

[vaiisgod666]

Ok..I got it put together and with drums too. Let me know what you think and what I can do to make this better? http://www.digitalsoundplanet.com/Me..._000029394.mp3

[vette6600]

cool. for a shred tune, i think it needs a longer solo section. nice harmonies.

[Magnafury]

haha very cool. The beat reminds me of that old N64 game 1080 snowboarding!

I really like the song with and without the drums. How many over dubs are going on in there?

[vaiisgod666]

Thanks. There is 3-4 guitars at once usualy. Some songs I have written before had up to like 7..haha. Then drums and keys.

[bpd111]

Slow down the fast parts. IMHO it's just too fast. The tempo change seems like two songs running into each other unsuccessfully. Otherwise, great job and keep it up. I really liked the second half after the Speed wore off.

[lyconxero]

The beginning was very In Flames-esque from back in the day and was definitely the best part for me. The main problem that I had with the song was that after the beginning the guitars just kind of ran over each other so the notes weren't very clear.

[damo7v]

i dig the changes. i don't know if it's just your recording technique or what, but your playing sounds quite accomplished. i think maybe you need a tone for the soloing that elevates it from the backing track.

hate the drums. very casio.

[Magnafury]

Hey man I love that first part. Would you tab it so I can learn it as a excersise?

[vaiisgod666]

Hey. Thanks for the comments. Yeah..I will tab it out. Im at my mothers right now watching over my grandma as my mother is away on vacation. As soon as I get back home I will post it for you.

Mike.

[Magnafury]

Originally Posted by vaiisgod666

Hey. Thanks for the comments. Yeah..I will tab it out. Im at my mothers right now watching over my grandma as my mother is away on vacation. As soon as I get back home I will post it for you.

Mike.

Dude your the man, Thanks!