your critique, por favor (again)

[damo7v]

if only because i make questionable decisions at 1.39am, i've decided to submit this recording from last year for your amusement:

soldier.mp3

i know i went kind of spaz at every opportunity to play fills - i have no self restraint and only slightly more talent.

i wrote this song many years ago when i was still in school. recorded last year using adobe audition (aka cooledit), fruityloops, and my rgt42.

[mi2tom]

hey not bad at all you're more than a guitarist than a singer. And yor phrasing is more like joe satriani

[mi2tom]

sorry i mean more a guitarist than a singer

[markg5150]

Cool Damo !!

[damo7v]

mi2tom: joe satriani? i wonder what joe would have to say about that!

markg5150: thanks man!

[mi2tom]

Originally Posted by damo7v

mi2tom: joe satriani? i wonder what joe would have to say about that!

markg5150: thanks man!

Well I don't know He'll say it's cool maybe

[damo7v]

do you have an email address for him? he'd probably love to hear it...

[mi2tom]

Originally Posted by damo7v

do you have an email address for him? he'd probably love to hear it...

hi i mean you have his type of phrasing it's ok to sound like him a bit though

[toma]

how old were you?
the guitarings pretty competent.
(by 'pretty competent' i mean bloody good compared to my best efforts)

[damo7v]

Originally Posted by toma

how old were you?
the guitarings pretty competent.
(by 'pretty competent' i mean bloody good compared to my best efforts)

it was recorded last year. i was about 30, so old enough to know better than to misuse the whammy in that way.

[LonePhantom]

Not bad at all, I enjoyed it.

[damo7v]

cheers mate.