New tune:Heart of the machine

[chavie]

hey guys just joined this places seems pretty cool place so far

basicly the tune is built around the idea
of a big robotic heart pumping ect ect


i know everything could be better
but id love any or all the criticism you guys can give


www.soundclick.com/chavie

[tTz]

Originally Posted by chavie

i know everything could be better

Spot the blatant lie.


Sounds pretty damned good, I really like it. I thought some things were perhaps a little quiet, but having said that, having all the various parts of the song louder might have made it a bit overbearing, so I dunno, really.


:edit:

And by the way, welcome to Jemsite.

[chavie]

thanks man hard to find a site
where people listen

[bluealien]

I really like some of your stuff... do you have a CD, or real web site?

[chavie]

nope
just my soundclick but seriously thanks for the interest and the compliments


im currently working on making a demo
we will see what happends i guess lol

[chavie]

bump ....

[bluealien]

So on thoses tunes its all you, some sound like live drums... if not thats a lot of drum programing... any ways I scanned thru a lot of them, really enjoyed some.. good work

[chavie]

yea all me

well i program some of the drums and use drum loops on others
im not the greatest programmer lol

and im just plain lazy

[mi2tom]

Very good!