for 20 it was alright...gotta clean up the playing a bit.
Sounds like you're hesitant to really grab hold of the bar...I would work the sh*t out of the bar, so you get a real good feel and very comfortable with it. It's kind of like bending, if you don't bend to the right spot it's very clear in the mix.
You have to own it, seems like you're holding back a tad.
Just go for it!
