You see that dot? Even where capitals fail, full stops always help.
Carefully...I know your computer must have a spell check. Even when you spell a word wrong it gets underlined in red.
And some capital letters at the start of your sentences
Really just some knowledge of how the shift key works would be a good start...
Just think it's pathetic that you could put 16 'p's in help but couldn't manage to hold down the Shift Key at the beginning of your sentences.
It was 1 extra h and 15 extra p's. The 1st p was actually part of the word. Also the letter I is capitalized when used on it's own. That would also be the shift key though.
hi i see all your guitars and want them all im addicted. this happen to you guys ?
I'm (uses an apostrophe)
guys? (no space between the end of a sentence and a question mark)
i want every ibanez ever made how do you stop if i could have just one i dont know what it would be wonder would this cure the problem.
In this section you actually ask 2 questions after making 2 statements. Question marks and exclamation points would be a good thing to add, for both effective writing as well as holding the readers attention.
probably not .i want a chrome one green 550 every jem ever made exceppt jem jr lol. every swirl i see i want it. ibanez is addicted i think if i knew to make them i would be satisfied anyone in alabama want to teach me and let me work for you lol im ready.
not. (again the wrong spacing in between punctuation)
Every swirl I see, I want.
Ibanez are addictive. (Unless you are talking about a fellow named Ibanez who happens to be addicted to something)
knew how to make them...
Alabama (proper nouns are Capitalized)
You might need a an English teacher. However in Alabama you may not have a lot of luck.