i listened to a few of the tracks and theres definately some good stuff there considering you havent been playing too long, im gunna give you some constructive critiscm though..
ill take the track 'Vivid dream' for example, i really liked the intro with some good chord choices but i wasnt keen on the lead guitar. the tone was a bit flat but i think you need to look at your phrasing. you tried to put loads of notes in, but that doesnt make a great melody, its about how you play it.. Vai says think of it as a conversation, you dont always talk in a constant rhythm, you pause and emphasize certain words.. try doing that in the melody.
im only saying this because i think that you can make some really good music, i had exactly the same problem and i wish someone would have helped me.
check out some of the songs on my soundclick page (search for darren roser) and let me know what you think
keep recording and let us know when you put something new up because id like to listen