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post #1 of 6 (permalink) Old 09-02-2004, 07:02 PM Thread Starter
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Here my music

Here is my music. I have played for a little over a year and am really just got too know the has become a good friend

Anyway please give me some feedback,,,but please be nice since i havent been playing too long
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post #2 of 6 (permalink) Old 09-03-2004, 10:31 AM Thread Starter
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No one?
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post #3 of 6 (permalink) Old 09-03-2004, 12:32 PM
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I liked it. Reminded me of Peter Green-era Fleetwood Mac in places, like "Oh Well, Pt2". The guitars sounded slightly out of tune in parts though, only a little but enough for keen listeners to notice.

I also liked the atmosphere that the track created. Keep recording. I've been playing for 13 years and I've only really started recording my stuff recently which I regret slightly. Get everthing you do down on tape.
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post #4 of 6 (permalink) Old 09-03-2004, 01:00 PM Thread Starter
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Cool glad u liked it.....thanks for listening

I do record most of what i play Love it
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post #5 of 6 (permalink) Old 09-04-2004, 08:44 AM
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i listened to a few of the tracks and theres definately some good stuff there considering you havent been playing too long, im gunna give you some constructive critiscm though..

ill take the track 'Vivid dream' for example, i really liked the intro with some good chord choices but i wasnt keen on the lead guitar. the tone was a bit flat but i think you need to look at your phrasing. you tried to put loads of notes in, but that doesnt make a great melody, its about how you play it.. Vai says think of it as a conversation, you dont always talk in a constant rhythm, you pause and emphasize certain words.. try doing that in the melody.

im only saying this because i think that you can make some really good music, i had exactly the same problem and i wish someone would have helped me.

check out some of the songs on my soundclick page (search for darren roser) and let me know what you think

keep recording and let us know when you put something new up because id like to listen

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post #6 of 6 (permalink) Old 09-04-2004, 09:27 AM Thread Starter
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Thanks mate...and i appreciate the constructive critisicm makes me better

I'll listen too your work
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