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Neonia

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#1 ·
Hey, hey, it's been a long time again, since I posted, but college demands have really took the best out of me.

Anyway, I did a solo over a backing track I got from a friend and called it Neonia. So I hope you'll listen, and comment on it. Any constructive criticism is alright, but the song is not really polished, because I was reeeeaaally stretched on time.

 
#2 ·
I'm not sure what you want people to say?
I don't know how long you've been playing etc so I would hate to be off putting. If it's constructive criticism you're after then I would say your bends, picking, phrasing, legato and tone all need more work. But if you've only been playing 4 or 5yrs then that'll seem a bit harsh. If you have only been playing a short while then I'd say keep doing what you're doing, you're heading in the right direction.
 
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