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post #1 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 01:22 AM Thread Starter
 
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One of my pieces

Well, since I opened my big mouth and made some comments on the music I heard here, Here is your chance to critque me. Be honest please.
I used my 72 Penco Paul and 87 Aria Pro through a Digitech RP-3, and recorded it to a Fostex X-88 (I think) Multi track, and added the keys and did the editing thru Adobe Audition 1.0.
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post #2 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 02:20 PM
 
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Re: One of my pieces

Its not my type of music, the sevendies hippy sorta thing is just sorta lame (no offense)
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post #3 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 04:07 PM
 
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Sounds good, I like it. It would be good for a movie.
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post #4 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 07:40 PM Thread Starter
 
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Re: One of my pieces

Thanks Jem...7. I've been told I write soundtrack music. And Metal...8, No offense taken. Thanks for the opinions!
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post #5 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 07:53 PM
 
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Re: One of my pieces

IMO the 70s hippy thing is fun - thoough not quite sure i would classify this as that. good jam music man - love the chorus with the clean and distorted signals.

wish you did a little more solo stuff though - it had a really good rythm part for that
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post #6 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 07:55 PM
 
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I dig that, it seems like there is something missing, like some lead instrument/vocals. It did have that Jefferson Airplane vibe to it, I enjoyed that. Cool instrumentation too.
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post #7 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 08:06 PM
 
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more solo stuff though - it had a really good rythm part for that
+1 i was waiting to hear more
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post #8 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 08:42 PM
 
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Re: One of my pieces

very soundtrack-y!

young man: "pizza delivery!"
lonely housewife: "but i don't have any money! how ever will i pay you?"

(cue mlr_pa's music...)
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very soundtrack-y!

young man: "pizza delivery!"
lonely housewife: "but i don't have any money! how ever will i pay you?"

(cue mlr_pa's music...)
lol not exactly what crossed my mind when i heard it, but possibly eh?
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post #10 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 09:23 PM
 
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Re: One of my pieces

on reflection, you're right.

substitute the pizza delivery man with a pot-dealing flower child.
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post #11 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-26-2005, 11:42 PM Thread Starter
 
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very soundtrack-y!

young man: "pizza delivery!"
lonely housewife: "but i don't have any money! how ever will i pay you?"

(cue mlr_pa's music...)

LMAO!!!!!!!!! Absolutly brilliant reply!
As for the soloing, or lack of, well, it was written for lyrics, but since I've been banned by the ASPCA to go anywhere near a mic.....
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post #12 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-27-2005, 06:55 AM
 
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Re: One of my pieces

not bad mlrpa
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post #13 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-28-2005, 08:54 PM
 
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MAN, sleepy time girl, is one of my favorit songs its so good, its like a song i would right when i just put my delay on and put it on clean, its proabaly one of my favorit songs, also i brang back old memories. ANOTHER cool song
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post #14 of 14 (permalink) Old 11-28-2005, 09:57 PM
 
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i like it, i don't think its bad at all, keep up the good work!
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