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post #1 of 10 (permalink) Old 07-10-2005, 08:37 PM Thread Starter
 
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Ok..I got it put together and with drums too. Let me know what you think and what I can do to make this better? http://www.digitalsoundplanet.com/Me..._000029394.mp3
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post #2 of 10 (permalink) Old 07-10-2005, 11:14 PM
 
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Re: Suggestions?

cool. for a shred tune, i think it needs a longer solo section. nice harmonies.
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post #3 of 10 (permalink) Old 07-11-2005, 01:08 AM
 
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haha very cool. The beat reminds me of that old N64 game 1080 snowboarding!

I really like the song with and without the drums. How many over dubs are going on in there?
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post #4 of 10 (permalink) Old 07-11-2005, 02:14 AM Thread Starter
 
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Thanks. There is 3-4 guitars at once usualy. Some songs I have written before had up to like 7..haha. Then drums and keys.
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post #5 of 10 (permalink) Old 07-11-2005, 02:50 AM
 
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Slow down the fast parts. IMHO it's just too fast. The tempo change seems like two songs running into each other unsuccessfully. Otherwise, great job and keep it up. I really liked the second half after the Speed wore off.
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The beginning was very In Flames-esque from back in the day and was definitely the best part for me. The main problem that I had with the song was that after the beginning the guitars just kind of ran over each other so the notes weren't very clear.
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post #7 of 10 (permalink) Old 07-11-2005, 08:30 AM
 
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Re: Suggestions?

i dig the changes. i don't know if it's just your recording technique or what, but your playing sounds quite accomplished. i think maybe you need a tone for the soloing that elevates it from the backing track.

hate the drums. very casio.
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post #8 of 10 (permalink) Old 07-12-2005, 12:34 AM
 
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Hey man I love that first part. Would you tab it so I can learn it as a excersise?
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post #9 of 10 (permalink) Old 07-14-2005, 01:24 AM Thread Starter
 
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Hey. Thanks for the comments. Yeah..I will tab it out. Im at my mothers right now watching over my grandma as my mother is away on vacation. As soon as I get back home I will post it for you.

Mike.
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Hey. Thanks for the comments. Yeah..I will tab it out. Im at my mothers right now watching over my grandma as my mother is away on vacation. As soon as I get back home I will post it for you.

Mike.

Dude your the man, Thanks!
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