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post #1 of 12 (permalink) Old 08-04-2005, 01:45 AM Thread Starter
 
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your critique, por favor (again)

if only because i make questionable decisions at 1.39am, i've decided to submit this recording from last year for your amusement:


i know i went kind of spaz at every opportunity to play fills - i have no self restraint and only slightly more talent.

i wrote this song many years ago when i was still in school. recorded last year using adobe audition (aka cooledit), fruityloops, and my rgt42.

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Re: your critique, por favor (again)

hey not bad at all you're more than a guitarist than a singer. And yor phrasing is more like joe satriani
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sorry i mean more a guitarist than a singer
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Cool Damo !!
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mi2tom: joe satriani? i wonder what joe would have to say about that!

markg5150: thanks man!
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mi2tom: joe satriani? i wonder what joe would have to say about that!

markg5150: thanks man!
Well I don't know He'll say it's cool maybe
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Re: your critique, por favor (again)

do you have an email address for him? he'd probably love to hear it...
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do you have an email address for him? he'd probably love to hear it...
hi i mean you have his type of phrasing it's ok to sound like him a bit though
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post #9 of 12 (permalink) Old 08-13-2005, 04:19 PM
 
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Re: your critique, por favor (again)

how old were you?
the guitarings pretty competent.
(by 'pretty competent' i mean bloody good compared to my best efforts)
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how old were you?
the guitarings pretty competent.
(by 'pretty competent' i mean bloody good compared to my best efforts)
it was recorded last year. i was about 30, so old enough to know better than to misuse the whammy in that way.
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Not bad at all, I enjoyed it.
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cheers mate.
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