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i dont believe it was the first song you ever wrote but it was rather impressive. most of these guitar idol applicants are straight poop
 

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thanks!

but it really was the first song... recently i started to record some of my ideas and this was the first one that was completed as a song. and before that i really had no interest in making my own music, i don't know why. but i'm glad that you liked this one.
 

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i do like the psuedo build up at the end however i think the song would be much more well recieved if it was maybe 30 seconds shorter. i say this because after you ran/run out of motifs the listener just forgets what they are hearing if nothing is grabbing their attention though. nice work though.
 

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You've got some nice phrasing and good overal vibrato. That's refreshing to hear! I'll forgive your bit sloppy fast parts for that ;)

keep up the good job!
 

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yeah you want to cut a good 30 seconds off,was starting to get a bit repetive after a while,but there was some decent playing going on.yep i thought it was ok
 

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Yer .... big fan. I think I saw your covers of ftlog and I remember being impressed with those. Its very hard to write a song that has decent melody if this truly is ur first song I think you've done a great job.
 

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Thanks!
Well, it's a Guitar Idol song, so it was supposed to have as much crap as possible, cause unfortunately, many people are still too impressed with arpeggios, fast alternate picking and other stuff... music is somewhere else, so I had to make a compromise, eventhough there's waay too much real soloing even for me, but still, it's a Guitar Idol song...

...if this truly is ur first song I think you've done a great job.
It is, it is, it is, it is, it is!!!!!!
It really is, honestly...
 

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ive just looked at some of the enterys.holy **** theres some real demon guitarists.igor paspalj peice was especially impressive.wonder how far he gets
 
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