[vaiisgod666]

Anyone want to tell me what they think and give me some advice on where to go with it? Some bends are out, rythms messy, etc. Imma fix that later..im just wondering about the construcion and melodies if they are alright and whatever else you can think of?

 

[vaiisgod666]

http://www.digitalsoundplanet.com/Members/000175835_000029334.mp3

 

[Magnafury]

sounds really good. I can hear some poping sounds in between some changes. maybe its my speakers.+(

overall that really kicks ass.


Good job man!